I was recently asked to review some marketing/communications pieces for a non profit organization. The ostensible purpose of this communication was to reinforce donor relations and to encourage future giving.
The theory seemed to be that if we give them information about what’s going on with projects the group was involved in, people would be more likely to free up the cash.
Among many problems with the piece, the largest was that there was absolutely no reason for anyone to read it.
I don’t mean that there was no valuable information in it. I mean that, in looking at the document, nothing would grab you by the lapels, shake you and say “STOP WHAT YOU’RE DOING. THERE IS SOMETHING REALLY VALUABLE/INTERESTING/ SECRET/ENTERTAINING/MOVING/…IN THIS THING. JUST KEEP READING!
That is the job of the headline. It doesn’t matter whether it’s an ad in a paper, a flyer, a speech, signage in a trade show, an email, a newsletter or just the old brochure, you must have a headline.
In a multi-device, multi-channel, multiple media world, there is a lot of competition for your attention. So you need to do something to grab that attention. That is the job of the headline.
A headline can qualify someone, as in “Hey, Expectant Mothers.” Anyone who isn’t an expectant mother or very close to one is unlikely to read the ad or listen to the spot. Would you care? Of course not. You’ve captured the attention of the market.
Or you could offer a benefit, as in “No more sore feet for expectant mothers.” Any expectant mother who has had sore feet or is concerned about getting sore feet will listen.
It can create excitement with news, as in “Just announced! 7 ways to make pregnancy easier”.
The Headline can also attract with social proof: “85% of Expectant Mothers Said This One Tip Changed Their Lives”
I could go on. There are tons of resources out there about headlines and good copywriting. Not all designers, web companies, social media consultants have taken the time to study this.
Make sure you do. The reason is simple. If the headline doesn’t stop them, they don’t read the ad. If they don’t read the ad…







